Sunday, January 17, 2010

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3 comments:

  1. very informative, very well put together, remember "ums" are BAD

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  2. forgot to add, you might want to cut yours a little becuase you are over time by almost 3 mins
    other than that it's great! very strong presentation

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  3. Thanks grace! (sorry, i only just now looked at my comments)

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