try to focus a bit less on describing the temple and just some more on what it tells us about the culture. but for 3:45 minutes, quite an informative presentation.
and make a better intro!! that was straightup lame doo.
you need a longer presentation, try to add more info
try to tie some facts from your description to the culture in general and try to elaborate on your thesis. better intro and conclusion.
thanks guys! im a lil late but w/eand i lol at my name sometimes>~~<
try to focus a bit less on describing the temple and just some more on what it tells us about the culture. but for 3:45 minutes, quite an informative presentation.
ReplyDeleteand make a better intro!! that was straightup lame doo.
ReplyDeleteyou need a longer presentation, try to add more info
ReplyDeletetry to tie some facts from your description to the culture in general and try to elaborate on your thesis. better intro and conclusion.
ReplyDeletethanks guys! im a lil late but w/e
ReplyDeleteand i lol at my name sometimes
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